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Holy Land Prototype

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On Reddit, for those who prefer it.

Hey guys, I’m looking for some feedback. Specifics can be found here, but the long and short of it is:

1. I need feedback on the systems, pacing, appearance, and feel; I welcome feedback on the story/writing/sound/music/art, but that isn’t my main focus right now.

2. I need testing on non-Windows browsers and on older Windows machines. If you could click through a few passages on a handful of different machines, if you have them, and report back, that’d be awesome.

There’s a google form linked at the end of the game for you to fill out to provide general feedback. I welcome all other comments, too, and you can just post those below, or PM me, or DM me on Discord if you're feeling froggy (same username as on here). If you have friends that don't hate these kinds of games and tend to give good feedback (in other words, if you have excellent taste in people), feel free to point them over here, too.

About Bugs

If (when) you encounter bugs (when in doubt, assume it’s a bug) please report them from the “report bug” link in the settings menu. You’ll be taken to a google form and given a string of characters to drop in there. Please use this form and provide the code; it allows me to partially recreate your experience to neutralize the problem (my code is spread out over more than 420 passages--I need all the help I can get finding those uncooperative bits).

Thanks!

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