Would love to get some feedback on the first beta version of Ms. Lojka: a kind of weird alternate-history-magical-realist short story that I'm working on. There's no save functionality, but it should be playable in just about 10 minutes.
Here's the link: http://jordanmagnuson.s3.amazonaws.com/mslojka/ms_lojka_beta01.html
Any and all feedback is welcome, from technical and readability issues, to feature improvements, to the actual writing.
Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time!
